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In many regions,crimes have been a serious issue.To cope with crimes,some people say that they should be imprisoned but others argue that better education plays a crucial role to remove crimes.I completely agree with the claim that education should be upgraded.There are some persuasive rationales to support that statement.

On the one hand,schools not only teach lessons but also provide students with many important skills and knowledge which will be helpful for students in the near future,they can contribute to the development of country.In addtion,at schools students are taught about the consequences of committing crimes and the punsinhments they will face so that they often obey the rules and respect other people.Moreover,many people commit crimes due to their bad backgrounds and chilhoods,they were grown up with violences from their families.If the government invest more effort and offer financial aid to enhance the quality of education.As a result,the crime rates will decline significantly.For example in Sweeden,the gorvenment invest about 1 billion dollars each year to improve the education with a view to reducing the proportion of people commiting crimes.

In contrast,punishing criminals by imprisoning them can have some disadvantages.To maintain prisons government has spent a huge amount of money and it is not worth.Criminals tend to reoffend after being released because they do not receive education during their time in prisons.Therefore,relying solely on imprisonment is unlikely to get rid of crimes effectively＋

In conlusion,although imprisonment can keep criminals away from soceity and give them time to rethink about their bad behaviours,I believe it is not a long-term solution.＋By implementing some solutions such as prevent crimes before it occurs and invest in education as it can create safety soceity.