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＋Moving to a new place has a lot of benefits for students. Although they can confront some challenges for the first time. I believe that if they overcome these challenges, they can get a lot of important life skills to build their career.

Regarding the first opportunity, people who move to a new place can improve many social skills about science, politics, and society because they broaden their knowledge from many of their experiences. Besides that they can interact with a lot of good opportunities which can help them for their career. For instance, people who study abroad can connect with many new friends and build a lot of good relationships which can help them for study and work. From that, they can advance in their career and have many good friends to discuss many problems. As a result, they become more confident than when they live at home and brave to confront plenty of challenges and become a social butterfly.Another major advantage is that people who live away from their home can have more freedom than live in their home because they are not under their parents control. Besides that, when they live away from home, they may make decisions that are not controlled by their parents. For instance, they can do many things which they like. In addition, they will learn autonomous skills.＋ For example they have to do housework themselves and make a lot of important decisions when their parents can not help them. As a result, we become more mature and it helps people improve themselves.

＋In conclusion, though people who live away from their home have to face many problems such as loneliness and temptation, I believe that they can be brave to overcome these problems and become more confident to achieve success.