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With the rapid advancement of communication technology: smartphones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

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With the rapid advancement of communication technology: smartphones, tablets and other mobile devices, some people believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

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Introduction

Technology’s role in communication and other fields is a widely debated topic. It is usually contended that technology devices has rapid advancements, while others believe that it also brings many disadvantages. This essay will discuss the influence of technology in communication and education, it also can lead to negative consequences outweigh the benefits if not balanced.

Body

The ability of connection is one reason why technology is essential nowadays. Communication technology devices provide global and instantly connectivity. They provide instant message and social media interaction. For example, it saves much time and long distance relationships causing people to feel fulfilling with virtual meeting and it remotes works from home by using technology devices. Moreover, it is a source of knowledge which has a big data. After coronavirus pandemic, it change the way to study. People build more useful e-learning platforms that will meet the needs of students across the world. Not only is e-learning more flexible, but it is more affordable without added expenses such as transport costs.On the other hand, there are difficulties in communication by using technology devices. It is crucial that it is harmful for health. It has negative effects for back and eyes if using technology for a long time. Blue light is decrease the quality of works that has decline in physic and mental health. Overusing mobile devices leads anxiety, disrupted sleep and stress. Futhermore, relationships in real life will be lost. It also makes people to feel shy in front of crowd if spending much time in virtual communication. For instance, nowadays, teenagers have many online friends and it replaces face-to-face interaction. It also leads low social skills in teens and makes them feeling lonely without social media.

Conclusion

In summary, while there are negative aspects for using mobile devices, I believe that this can be useful and improvement with modern technologies in communication and other fields if we can manage time for them.

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