नमूना विवरण

＋In recent years, the increase concern about whether senior people should adopt practical skills by themselves or take part in a course to learn with teachers. In this essay, I will analyse both view before giving my opinion.

On the one hand, It is understandable why many people tend to learn by themselves. First and foremost, in terms of financial factor, they can save up their money especially those who have lower income would meet their demand without expenditure.＋ Moreover, concentration plays a vital role in knowledge acquirement. The elderly who claim that they can stay disciplined and determined than other age groups. Therefore, instead of taking part in a class, they are likely to learn by themselves.

On the other hand, others argue that learning with professionals acts as a catalyst for them to understand thoroughly. Teachers who are expertised at that area would put forward sysmatically obvious theories accompanied practical lessons, leading to deeper insight. Furthermore, whereas their questions and mistakes would be answered and improved bt their teachers. In addition, there are many others in the class so that they can develop their skills by realistic conversations and surveys mutually.

In my opinion, I believe that adults should learn with expertised individuals as it not only help them access to a transparent line with detailed lessons or learn from others but enables them to augment their mistakes by teachers. Although taking a course requires a sum of money to pay for, I contend that valuable experiences and lessons gained are comtempletely worthy.

＋In conclusion, learning without guidelines helps them to remain their budget and is suitable for those who are vulnerable to be distracted by others; however, taking part in a class would encourage them to have a obvious training and broaden their horizon by practical conversations.