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＋In today's modern society world, some people think that watching TV has an adverse effect on children, while other people support watching TV. Although it is reasonable that many adults think that watching TV is bad for their kids, I firmly believe that the benefits are more significant

Admittedly, there are several drawbacks, which make many parents prevent their offspring from watching TV. To begin with, spending a lot of time for watching TV will directly affect children's eyes. This is because maintaining their concentration on watching some TV programs, including animation or entertainment shows gives children's eyes the feeling of tiredness, which leads to serious myopia. Moreover, watching TV also addictive. For instance, if children spend most of their time for watching TV, they will be immerse in the virtual world. In the long run, this makes children addicted to watching TV and neglect their study, which has an adverse effect on their future.＋

Despite these considerable problems, I still strongly believe that the advantages of watching TV are very important in children's lives. Firstly, this is the best way to reduce stresses. This is because after the long day of study, students can unwind by watching their favourite TV programs, such as entertainment shows or cuisine shows, which very useful for uplifting their moods. Therefore, they can study more efficient and active because of their their good mental health. In addition, watching TV can also expand children's knowledge about various things in the world. For example, watching educational shows, such as ' Ring The Bell ' or ' Olympia ' helps children absorb many informations, which related to languages or science. This will be useful in their future career

In conclusion, even though there are some negative impacts of watching TV on children, including leading to serious myopia and and making children addicted, I still believe that watching TV plays a vital role in children's live because of this is the efficient way to open their mind and expand their knowledge