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＋In recent years, a number of individuals argue that full-time university students who are learning at university spend a lot of time studying and others people believed that students should spend a lot of time to do other activities too.＋ From my perspective, i strongly agree with this view that they should spend time to do activities with friend or other students. In this essay, i will explain the reasons for my opinion.

The first reason of my view is that students should spend a lot of time to do other activities. When they carefully manage time between study and other activities, they will feel reduce stress and relax. Because they spend full time of studying, they can feel pressure and stress, so that they effect to health or emotion. For example, after a long day stress at university, students continue learning at school with full of homework and they only think about subject which are bored or pressure about difficult of asking about knowledge. Hence, it is clear that students should spend time to do other activities such as: playing games, listening to music or basically they also can learn about new sports＋

Another reason supporting my position is that they can improve their ability, health or skills. In the process that they do other activities, they can learn more new skills such as : life-skills, communication skill,...And they also feel comfortable and refresh their energy after a long day stress at university. Because bored subjects can make them tired, stress so that they will become shy, less communicate and don't want to connect with other peoples. For example, comparing a students who knows ways to balance time between study and play, they will usually full of energy, they also can have more skill than other students who only know study. Therefor, other activities also no less than study that is very important for students, specially with leaner who are developing in emotion, health, thinking,..＋

＋In conclusion, i firmly believe that leaner should way to balance time between study and other activities. It is hoped that the government should implement many entertaiment activies to university, so that it helps student feel relax, comfortable and have more opportunity to developing full skill when they study at univeristy