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The plans below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today. Summarise the informations by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today. Summarise the informations by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The first picture shows the site of a farm in 1950, and the bottom picture is the current image of the same site. In 1950, the site was previously a farm. There were some fruits trees or vegetables, animals such as chickens and they also have barn. It shows that the area of the sheep farm was quite huge. And it was divided by the tracks between fruits or other animal farms and sheep farms. However, right now, this Beechwood Farm has changed some areas. Firstly, they completely destroyed a huge sheep farm area, instead they put some shops, parkings, camping fields, or even holiday cottages for the visitors. Next they changed track into road so that it is easier to access to the farm for people. Finally, they added energy resources which are solar panels to generate energy sustainable as growing visitors. This Beechwood Farm used to only for farmers but now they implemented some resources for entertainment to attract people to come and interact with animals .

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