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Write a report with this question: The graphs show the changes in the UK industry steel between 1970 and 2000. (đơn vị là people và tonnes)

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Write a report with this question: The graphs show the changes in the UK industry steel between 1970 and 2000. (đơn vị là people và tonnes)

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The area chart illustrates the changes of employment status in the UK industry steel, while the line graph depicts the changes of three steel industry including total demand, production and import in the UK between 1970 and 2000. Overall, the employment status in the UK was peaked at 1970, by contrast, they were lowest in the end of the period with the significant individuals. It was similar to the value changes, while at the initial period, total UK demand and production recorded the high value but they were noticeably decreased over the end of the period. Regrading to the employment status in UK steel industry, the number of people were the highest at 50000 people in 1970. Following that, it was slightly decline, with the number decrease approximately 10000 people in 1980. However, the count of drop was not signs of stopping, as the figures continue substantially decline in 1990, with 20000 individuals. it was slightly decrease at the end of the period, at 18000 in 2000. Concerning the value changes in the UK, the import value was the only increase compared with two others employment status, which the figures rose from 12000 to 75000 in 2000. In contrast, total UK demand and production were two highest category, with 200000 and 180000, respectively. However, they were significant fall from 1970 to 2000, which the figures at 100000 80000, respectively.

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TA6.0
CC6.0
LR6.0
GRA6.0

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