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The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B

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The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B

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The given pies compare the proportion of men and women who work in industry, agriculture and services sectors in country A and country B. From an overall perspective, it is evident that the largest percentage in four charts belonged to services. Also noticeable was that country A witnessed the second rank of agriculture and the third for industry in both male and female employers, whereas country B showed a reverse tendency. Looking at country A in more closely, one can see that both genders employed in the services field occupied the highest figure at 56% and 49%, respectively. This was followed by agriculture, at 29% with men and 43% with women, while the proportion of industry accounted for the lowest value at 15% for male workers and 8% for females. Turning to country B, the data on services were also greatest, making up 11% higher than male workers in country A and remained unchanged with the proportion of females. The opposite trend can be seen in the percentage of agriculture, both male and female employers, comprised the smallest at only 3% and 1%. Finally, industry recorded 32% as the figure for men and 11% for women.

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