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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits to living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits to living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Introduction

There was an on-going debate about where is easier to have a healthy lifestyle, the rural or the urban areas. I believe that the latter surpasses the former because of the access to green produces, medical and healthcare facilities.

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Granted, one might argue that living in the countryside is likely to be healthier. This is because these places provide people with fresh vegetables, enabling them to have a healthy meal in an instance by harvesting crops from their fields and this is a significant advantage compared to citizens. However, this line of reasoning fails to factor that urban areas are equipped with a vast number of supermarkets so residents can get access to fresh agricultural products with no difference in terms of quality and nutrition. Furthermore, they can have a wide variety of choices, making their diet more varied and appealing. It seems that although fresh produce is a primary benefit for being healthy in the rural areas, cities can do it even better.

To add further credence to my assertion, I note that life in the cities offers access to modern hospitals for healthcare check. These hospitals utilize technological devices and employ doctors with high level of medical skills, able to point out any potential diseases associated with lifestyle. As a result, urban residents can get prescribed to prevent these illnesses. Additionally, people in cities can register for subscription at fitness centers. There, they can get proper guidance about staying physically active through exercising and provided a customized diet from their personal trainer. This would mean that they will become more health-concious, by extension, improving their overall health. For instance, there is a growing demand for yoga, weight lifting and boxing in the USA since people usually suffer from obesity, resulting in a large number of newly opened fitness centers.

Conclusion

In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the urban areas than in the countryside.

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