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＋In some nations, a large group of people believe that owning a home is better than renting one. This essay will discuss a root cause, which is the pursuit of success and recognition, leading to this trend. Although this choice shows some merits, I still suppose that this is such a negative situation.

Nowadays, more and more individuals tend to spend most of their time working to buy a house. Regarding the former, notably, the main cause, resulting in this option is that people are mainly driven by the ambition and pressured by social expectations. Specifically, when it comes to the development of social media, showing many influencers, who are wealthy and own a large number of houses, people are likely to believe that buying a house is easy. They begin to think that if they cannot own a home, they are an unsuccessful people. This thought leads to the tendency of working harder to buy a house, instead of renting.＋

Despite having some plus points, I strongly believe that this trend is a negative development. Importantly, from my perspective, the main factor. indicating this choice is negative trend is that making excessive effort may cause serious consequences on well-being. Particularly, individuals, tending to invest substantial much amount of time and energy into working without sufficient rest might suffer from several diseases, such as chronic stress, burnt out, which triggers the reduction of overall well-being. As a result, people in this group not only experience a decline in their productivity and performance, they also endure various diseases, related to mental health as well.

＋In light of the arguments presented above, one of the main reason, causing the trend of buying a home is the desire in each individual and the pressure from social standards. From my perspective, I remain firmly believe that this choice is a negative development, since it stimulates people to work harder, without pausing, leading to the reduction in overall well-being.