Some people suggest that harmful content on the internet has become excessively increasing in today's world, and the government should strictly limit these contents by censoring it on websites to contribute meaningfully to the internet safety. From my personal perspective, Although censoring the content on websites can be beneficial, I agree that this action is still too conservative to protect people from dangerous contents on the Internet.+
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Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?
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Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet?
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Admittedly, many people advocate that censoring all sort of content of websites can thoroughly protect many users, especially for children's protection. They insist that there will be some over-aged content that pops up on the website while users are watching videos or playing online games, in which their attentions can be captivated, and it even provokes humans' curiosity - personality that can bring both benefits and downfalls to daily lives, especially for children. In this sense, these dangerous information can easily mislead people's cognitive development and let them to commit crime through frequent exposure to these unsuitable pops-up. This means that censoring contents on all website can efficiently lower the dangerious contents on the Internet by lowering their approach to inappropriate content.
However, as far as I am concerned, this practice is still not thoroughly effective enough to protect internet users. No matter how reliable a website is, this measure means that these websites are still limited and censored, requiring a sophisticated process to unlock this feature, which can make people find it annoying and time-consuming. Instead, it is more imperative for the government to collaborate with reliable websties in order to manage the available contents popping up on these sites. The government, moreover, should also encourage more educational and healthy recreational contents that are suitable for each age level by utilizing the role of collaborator such as suggesting limiting unknown-origin advertisements or setting the suitable age of the websites. This means that various people may therefore be have a right to enter and enjoy their own online experience without being restricted by unnecessary censoring, thereby making the strategy of limiting harmful contents more effectively and relentlessly.
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+In conclusion, although it is understandable that only censoring contents on all websites can be beneficial to some extent, it should be well-managed through collaborations instead of triggering annoying and uncomfortable experience online.
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