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Some inviduals believe that subjects requierd talent, such as painting and drawing, should not be provided to high school student by compulsion. Personally, I agree with this view because of some reasons that are explained in this essay.

Admittedly, those subjects also provide to student some advantages. Practically, atending in art classes may contribute students' creativity, helping them to observed the problems in many different ways and improve the answer's quality. For example, research shows that art students tend to solve the problems, in their life, by an uncommon way while have higher the accuracy compared to others, they also often see harshly situations with a positive view, which make them be calmer and increase the accurate rates in problems solving. Because of that, succesful people also suggest their family members such as sons and daughters to learn them if they are free, which may help them in the future.＋

However, this is also a disavantage for untalented people to spend time and learn arts subjects. Not all of us are the same, some can only do math while the others good at playing instruments, and force learners to study arts will waste their time while learning nothing from it. Consequently, students will not have time to other subjects like math or physic, which are more favoured in labour market, causing them unneeded stress because they need to balance their study plan, and decreasing the quality of their education. Moreover, this will cost them their parents' money, their wished job or even life in the future, making them be unsuccessful in others' eyes and increasing country's unemployment rate.＋

＋In conclusion, I agree with the opinion that art subject should not be made compulsory for high school students, because this may be useless for some students. Rather than spending time in this kind of subjetcts, students can studying more useful subjects deeper or learning some life skills, which are not provided in school.