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＋Nowadays, many people think children should learn a foreign language at primary school. Other people think secondary school is better. In my opinion, learning early has more advantages than disadvantages.

On the one hand, learning a foreign language at primary school has some disadvantages. First, young children are very small. They already have many subjects like math and reading. If they learn a new language, they can feel tired and stressed. Second, children can mix their native language with the new language. They might not speak their own language well.＋

On the other hand, there are many advantages when children start early. First, young children can learn languages very fast. Their brains are good at remembering new words and sounds. Second, learning early helps children have better pronunciation. They can speak like native speakers because they are not afraid of making mistakes. Finally, it helps them in the future. When they grow up, they can find a good job easily because they know English or another language.＋

＋In conclusion, learning a foreign language in primary school has some problems like stress. However, I believe the benefits are bigger because children can learn faster and speak better.