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Nowadays, many people use the Internet to get medical advice instead of going to see a doctor. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? (Positive or Negative).

22/07/2026 05:13 6.5 skor

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Nowadays, many people use the Internet to get medical advice instead of going to see a doctor. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? (Positive or Negative).

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Introduction

It is true that more and more people tend to resort to advice on the internet instead of going to see a doctor. Personally, regardless of some merits for simple health problems, this trend is seemed to be harmful due to numerous issues for both individuals and society.

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On the one hand, it has to be acknowledged that online advice for health have many advantages. First and foremost, due to the increasing popularity of Internet all over the world, everyone can learn about medical everytime and everywhere, which helps them save time and money. For instance, they may get advice from healthcare staff or even normal people; hence, not only do they save time but they also economize fees and ensure their health. Another compelling reason is that because of many real information on the Internet, humans will have chance to broaden their horizons about treatment and have stronger conditions. To illustrate, they can read news from experts or reviews from other patients, paving the way for best choices for themselves. Nevertheless, inspite of benefits given above, I still hold that this trend should not be encouraged for people, especially who have serious diseases. From a personal perspective, as symptoms are only one of the standards to diagnose illness, sick people don't go to see a doctor, leading to worse health. As an illustration, doctors analyze in detail about the patients' health and give them best advice, while various humans don't want to see doctors or only meet them when the disease is more serious or even at the point of no return. At a social level, the overreliance on online information has an effect on other aspects of lives, laying the foundations for social unrest. For example, there are a big number of people who follow non-scientifically-proven methods advertised by influencers, leading to social health problems and pressure for society.

Conclusion

In conclusion, online advice make a contribution to help people reduce the time and money, however, these should not be welcomed due to potentials for individuals and society. In my opinion, a combination is the best way. Sick people should gain experience from the Internet and see a doctor as soon as possible to find the most practical treatment for themselves

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