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Many young people do not enjoy competitive sports because they’re afraid of losing. Therefore, sports competitions should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

22/07/2026 05:37 6.5 अंक

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Many young people do not enjoy competitive sports because they’re afraid of losing. Therefore, sports competitions should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Introduction

Nowadays, an increasing number of individuals from younger generation are not fond of competitive sport because they afraid of loosing, therefore these sports should be prohibited. While I content that losing a game can significantly takes the mood down and accumulating frustration, it is my firm conviction that competitive sports greatly foster determination and resilience, as will be discussed in this essay.

Body

Regarding the opponents of competitve sports, there are several reasons why individuals advocate for their prohibition. Chief among these is the fear of failure, this can be explained by the fact that players subsequently encounter pressure and expectations from both coaches and parents, anxiety and stress therefore accumulates within the individuals, leading to an unwanted or even bad performance . In addition, they may also receive disappointed or reluctant looks from other people, even their loved ones. This indeed, only exarcerbate the unstable mentality they already have after finishing a bad match, therefore damaging their self-esteem, leading to a decrease in willingness to step out and perform again. Thus, it is understandable why this perspective continue to being prevalent, younger people themselves do love the sport, it just that they are psychologically unprepared to cope with the immense pressure they encounter, so they find alternatives way to avoid it.On the other hand, I maintain that competive sports represents a more beneficial approach for more profound reasosns. Primarily, competiveness serves as a crucial catalyst for fostering valuable qualities that teenagers desire. Having to face with intense pressure and the fear of losing, individuals tend to improve, to develop abilities in order to cope with that, and competive sports pave the way for discipline, resilience and determination. This, prepare individuals abilities to deal with life in the future. Additionally, the long-term implications of sports cannot be overlooked, as it promotes social abilites and leadership, competitive sports tend to be a team sports, so it nurture the person’s ability to communicate, to intergrate into a group, which is again essential qualities and personalities that they will need later in life.

Conclusion

In conclusion, although the prohibition of sports offers certain undeniable benefits such as the relief in mind and an escape from constant pressure and stress, I reiterate my stance that maintaining competitive sports is far more advantegeous due to the ability to improve the person’s characteristic, therefore, it is mrre beneficial in the long run and should be prioritized to achieve better results.

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