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＋Many schools give their students school holiday for a long time. And I strongly believe that long school holiday has many benefits compared to short school holidays.＋

There are several reasons to support this argument.

Firstly, student always need to focus on study during the school time. Many assignments are given to them and they also have to study for important exams. Therefore, they tend to be in their house the whole day, and do not go out. School holiday is very good occasion to go out such as hiking, swimming in the beach or playing sports. They can enjoy feeling actual the nature. In addition, they also spend less time with their family as they spend more time on social media or studying. Thus, if the school break is long period of time, they could go on a trip, and have precious time with their family. By traveling and enjoying with their family, students will be able to break free from digital addiction.＋Finally, long school vacation trains student self-management. Since they have a lot of time, they can manage their time however they want.＋ That is exactly why long school holiday can improve their lifestyle. If they sleep and wake up early, go to the gym, they will be more productive, and will be proud of themselves eventually.

In conclusion, long school holidays have a lot of advantages for students as well as their families. It can build better relationship with their family, overcome their worse time cycle, and train and develop their time management,