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The two plans below show a bookstore in 2000 and the bookstore at present. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The two plans below show a bookstore in 2000 and the bookstore at present. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The map depict the change made to beach holtel between 2003 to 2013. Overall, the hotel was significantly expaned over the ten-year period. More accommodation and recreational facilitiesd were added, while the restaurant was relocated. In 2003, there was one row of hotel rooms in centre of the site. The restaurant was on the left side, while a seating area was between the restaurant and the hotel rooms. A small swimming pool was on the right side. There was also a fence in front of the hotel, separating it from the beach. By 2013, many changes had been made. The number of hotel rooms increased because another row of rooms was built below the original one. The swimming pool became much larger and was moved to the left side. Some palm trees were also added around the pool. The restaurant was moved to the right side of the hotel. A larger seating area was built next to it. In addition, a new water sports building was constructed near the beach. Finally, the fence was removed ,allowing visistor walk

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