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The plans below show a college cafe before it was redesigned and how it looks now.

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The plans below show a college cafe before it was redesigned and how it looks now.

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The map illustrates a college cafe before it was redesigned and how it looks now. Overall, it is evident that the cafe saw significant adjustments. The most notable changes were the barbecue, outdoor seating and salad bar. The recycling bins, hot meals and coffee bar have slightly changed and the kitchen and the center of map remains. The college cafe before redesign had a kitchen and serving area on the top left-hand corner. In the middle there were many tables and chairs for students, and also had a staff dining room in front of it. On the right had a small bin and toilets in the bottom right-hand sight. But the cafe today is enlarged. First, the serving area changes to hot meals, staff dining rooms modify to take away food and coffee bars and then bins are upgraded to recycle bins. Next there was a barbecue and outdoor seating on the bottom and salad bar on the left of the map.

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