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＋These days, many universities have upgraded their infrastructure by constructing more dormitories in schools'campuses. Although such an idea brings about several visible merits, it causes confusion among students about their accommodations. From my point of view, there are more reasonable grounds that college students should live in schools rather than at home with their families.＋

Firstly, living with parents help students concentrate on their schoolwork more effectively. If they need any support, their families are willing to lend them a hand in various chores such as cleaning house, cooking, and so forth. There are more time to focus on assignments and quieter space for them to relax after dealing with stressful homeworks; therefore, collegians will finish their projects with high quality by the deadline. Furthermore, staying at home is also a way for students to shorten the generation gap with their parents. This is because they will have more opportunities to meet and talk with their families' members whenever they like. There is no geographical barriers that prevent them from sharing their daily stories with their beloved mom anymore. As a result, universities'students will know more about their parents' genuine character and build intimate relationships with their parents. By contrast, they will become over-reliant on their parents and thus do not develop independence in their lifestyles.＋

However, there are more reasonable grounds that living in schools' campuses is more beneficial than living with families. First of all, this is a chance for undergraduates to live independently and build up for themselves more interpersonal skills. It is unavoidable that they need to live with other students whose lifestyles are much different from theirs. Therefore, they need to learn how to be respectful and live harmoniously with other students to avoid causing controversies and gaining more goodwill from people around. Moreover, there is free access to librabries and readily available learning resources for on-campus students. They do not have to waste their time searching for academic references on the internet to broaden their horizons in certain subjects. Another thing is that all of those learning materials at universities'libraries are more appropriate for students. If off-campus students ought to spend their time reading references on internet to know whether it is suitable for them or not, those who live colleges' dormitories do not need to do that because all of which have been carefully selected by their trustworthy teachers. Compared to living at home, residing on campus is a more plausible option for students to choose when they are in two mind about where to live.＋

＋In conclusion, although living with guardians offers various attractive benefits, there is more compelling evidence that staying in campuses is the most ideal choice for students. It is recommended that students should step out of their comfort zones and live in schools' accommodations to build up self-confidence.