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US Employment Trends The graph below gives information about the number of jobs in four sectors of the economy in the US between 1960 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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US Employment Trends The graph below gives information about the number of jobs in four sectors of the economy in the US between 1960 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given line graph tracks the data on the proportion of occupations in the economy in distinct four sectors namely-Manufacturing, retail. agriculture and healthcare in the United state from 1960 to 2020. From an overall pespective, it can be evident that, the number of careers in healthcare experienced a great increase throughout the years. Conversely, in the sector of agriculture, there was a gradually downfall. Manufacturing sector is execptional that reached at peak with a great number of jobs. There were 2 millions jobs in the commence of period. Gradually, it rose up to 5 millions in 1980. Subsequently, it gained 15 millions of jobs in 2020. Moreover, the number of occupations in retail started from 6 millions and remained constant till 2000. Afterthat, there was a slight increase over 15 millions in 2020. By 1960, the sector that consistently experienced decline that was in an agriculture from 6 millions to 2 millions from 1960 to 2020. Ultimately, manufacturing careers had 15 millions jobs in 1960, that gained the majority of jobs (20 millions) and fell in 2020.

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