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＋It is believed that there is no advantages in the existance of zoos nowadays. This essay strongly disagree with that statement for several reasons.

The first explanation for my opinion is that zoos have an important role in animal conservation. This is because they adopt endangered animals that might no longer survive due to natural or human negative effects, particularly natural disasters or illegal logging. Thus, zoos’ functions are feeding, providing care and protecting these animals, thereby increasing their population. A case in point is that many elephants or tigers in the wild are likely to suffer from poaching for their bodies' parts, and therefore zoos offer them a safe living condition from this risks. This is why I prove that zoos have the crucial impacts on conserving endangered animals.

The second point behind my belief is that zoos do such great performance in education. Since they are homes to a variety of animals, ranging from marine creations to reptiles, zoos offer visitors information about these animals’ kinds, habitats or useful details. As a result, this broadens visitors’ knowledge about the nature world. For instance, many schools today organize zoo trips for their students to provide them with real-life connection with animals, and thus students will have better understanding about biological lessons at school. Because of this reason, the existance of zoos probably brings about positive influences on exploring animals in the modern life.

＋In conclusion, I totally disagree that it is meaningless to maintain or visit to the zoos today given to aforementioned argument.