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The plans below show a small theatre In 2010, and the same theatre in 2012.

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The plans below show a small theatre In 2010, and the same theatre in 2012.

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The plans illustrate changes of a small theatre in two years of 2010 and 2012. Overall, it is evident that more facilities were added into the left of the theatre. It is also noticeable that some places have been replaced or extended throughout the years. Looking at the first map, in 2010, there was a cafe which was to the right of the main door, and the remaining corner was the ticket office and admin office. The auditorium was located at the centre of the theatre, and a door was on the top-left corner. At the top of the theatre was the dressing room, which was behind the stage, having a door that related to a storage room at the left. Turning to the map of 2012, the cafe was extended into a restaurant located at the left of the hall. The ticket office was moved to the old cafe’s place, while the admin office was in the left corner of the auditorium. It is clear that the auditorium had no change throughout the years. The stage was wider than before, and added a corridor at the right side and behind. Storage was replaced to the right side of the stage, while the dressing room was in the old areas of the storage. A shower was also built next to the dressing room.

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