In recent days, youngs especially children are putting on weight which have detrimental effect on both mental and physical health. Some people argue that the government is responsible for this problem and they need to solve it. While acknowledging that government can actually minimize this problem, I still believe that issue is mainly from people’s daily diets and activities.
नमूना विवरण
1. In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
विषय
1. In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Of course, proponent of the scenario should be taken by the government might argue that the policymakers should implement policies about reducing the fat product in people daily food especially those have high cholesterol. However, this argument is flawed as the government cant actually control all the spices or food ingredients that is added into people’s dish especially the fat rate. In addition, many fat food restaurant now can found mostly anywhere throughout the world, the government can’t just ban those restaurant for containing high cholesterol food, thereby, everything they can is to encourage their residents to adopt a healthy eating lifestyle and maintain doing exercise annually.
On the other hand, I believe there are plenty of approaches to maintain a healthy eating lifestyle especially controlling the fate rate in their daily diet. Many apps or AI now allows their users to check every ingredients in their food even the calories and cholesterol which helps those who are in diet control the nutrients that are absorbed into their bodies. Moreover, children who have tons of free time can engage in sporting activities or just do some regular exercises at home to burn the calories they have absorbed. These approaches are far more realistic and way more efficiency than force the government to solve this personal problem. Children who can maintain a healthy lifestyle tend to be more self-confident and live without the constant fear of health problems.
Conclusion
+In conclusion, while government can contribute to addressing this issue, what they can do is negligible. In contrast, children can solve this problem easily by changing their eating habit and their lifestyle which might require motivation in terms of the benefits it yield, it’s just completely worth it.
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