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The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

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The chart shows the sales of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.

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The line graph indicates the sales of strawberry, raspberry, grape, cherry and plum between 2009 and 2014. Overall, while strawberry, raspberry and grape increased significantly, that of plum showed a downward trend. In addition, there was a fluctuation in the sales of cherry and strawberry had the highest sales of five different kinds at the beginning of the period. At the end, plum remained the lowest sales of five different kinds. Looking at the details, the strawberry experienced a remarkable rise over the 5 years. In 2009, the strawberry remained the largest sales of five different kinds at around 3.7 and rose significantly from 3.5 in 2010 to 7 in 2014. The grape was the lowest in 2009 at around 0.5 and increased remarkably between 1.5 in 2010 and 4.5 in 2014. The raspberry started at 2.7, and then it rose considerably and unchanged at increased marginally from 5.1 in 2012 to 5.5 in 2014. In contrast, the plum showed a downward trend over the 5 years. It decreased steadily to reach its lowest point from 2.5 in 2009 to 0 in 2014. The cherry started at 1.9, then it increased slightly to 2.5 in 2010. However, it fell marginally to 2 in 2011. But the figure increased significantly and then decreased slightly.

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