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Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Introduction

It is thought that punishing young criminals should be the way as adults. Although there are explanations for this view, it fails to fully ignore the fact that this idea may do more harm than good.

Body

On the one hand, it is understandable why proponents of this trend claim that young people committing serious wrongdoings should be punished in the same way as adults. This could help children understand potentially that wrongdoings would have their own consequences. As children are easily influenced, when they would be over-exposed to violent or distorted contents, and they would imitate these patterns through learning from observations. As a result, punishing young criminals as adults would allow them to have more time to thinking about their antisocial behaviors, resulting in protecting society and increasing trust in legal systems.

On the other hand, it would be impolitic to overlook the drawbacks of this idea. From a social perspective, young criminals experiencing the same punishments as adults would lead to an increase in the reoffending rate. This is because when they come back from prisons, it may be hard for them to integrate into daily life. As their basic human rights would be strictly under restriction by the governments, and people would have more prejudice towards them. As a result, since young criminals would believe that they had paid a price for their mistakes, they could become more stressful and increase resentment towards society, and criminal activities would be justified.

Conclusion

To summarize, although this view has certain benefits, including protecting society and increasing trust in legal systems, I believe that a mixed approach would be more desirable.

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