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Some people think that technology makes people more isolated, while others believe it helps people communicate better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that technology makes people more isolated, while others believe it helps people communicate better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Introduction

Some people believe that people become more isolated by technology, while others regard technology as an necessary development in the hope of contacting intelligent life. In this essay, I would evaluate both views before proposing my own opinion.

Body

Those who support technology interrupt bonding of people in somehow is true. This is because nowadays more and more people overuse technology. For example, many children nowadays tend to addict smart phone to watch entertaining videos instead of educational channels, their parents are also absorbed in social media. As a results, this phenomenon can make a significant gap between parents and their children. In addition, modern platforms allow people can communicate each other by chatting, video call. This also reason people nowadays is becoming more isolate.

On the other hand, although technology show some drawbacks, it also provide users a wide range of convenience and modern thing. Approaching reasonably help people have a easy life such as solving deadline, doing homework and so on. For instance, as people use technology such as washing machine with artificial intelligent, it enable user can save their time and all work are done by AI. A typical case in point is Chine, which is a country with a incredible development of AI applying for educate. This innovation contributes to make a modern study style, helping students have a convenient tool to study and accelerating study process. In my opinion, I agree with second view because advantages of technology show are greater than disadvantages. On top of that, we can change our bad habits like overuse AI to turn technology devices into necessary and useful.

Conclusion

In conclusion, although both view have their own merit, I still believe technology devices will continue exist and develop.

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