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The diagram shows the production stages of fresh orange juice and orange juice made from concentrate. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include coparisons where appropriate.

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The diagram shows the production stages of fresh orange juice and orange juice made from concentrate. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include coparisons where appropriate.

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The provided diagram demonstrates the process of manufacturing two types of orange juice, namely fresh orange juice and orange juice made from concentrate. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that both types of orange juice undergo similar the three-stage process, beginning with preparation and culminating with the final products. Initially, fresh orange is delivered by tracks to the factory to be cleaned up. After that, it is gone through a machine that extract to separate water and solid waste. The waste then uses to feed the animals and the water goes through the pipe to a container. The next step is sorting the juice, part of it will be packaging and load into the tracks. Finally, they are ready to be sent to the shops. Meanwhile, the remeaning juice is undergone many complex steps to be sold, the former part requires just a few steps. The juice remaining will be experienced the process called "exvaporation" with water, the mixture will be concentrated to orange juice before being canned. Having been loaded into tracks, the canned orange juice will be delivered to the warehouse in order to storage After that, they continue transporting them back to the factory and combine them with water before packaging and send them to the shops

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