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The charts below show the percentage of students on an adult education center taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the percentage of students on an adult education center taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie charts compare the proportion of students participating in different courses at an adult education center between 1985 and the present. Overall, modern languages took the highest percentage of participants in 1985, while music appreciation experienced the lowest number of students. Moreover, although the figures for members of Art, Modern Languages, Music Appreciation, and Local History have decreased, Cookery, It have climbed in the same period. Except for Fitness and Dance, which have remained. In 1995, nearly a quarter of the students enrolled in Modern Languages such as French, German, and Spanish. Followed by Fitness and Dance, which course had close numbers with 22%. Furthermore, Art classes attracted 17%, slightly higher than Cookery and Local History, which accounted for 14% and 15% respectively. Music classes were the most uncommon, with 8% of students joining it. At present, Fitness and Dance have remained unchanged. Meanwhile, Art has moderately declined to 15%, and the proportion of Mordern Lannguages falling to 17%; Cookery has witnessed a slight increase to 19%. Additionally, IT appeals to 27% of enrollments, becoming the most popular class at present

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