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The diagrams show changes in student accommodation.

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The diagrams show changes in student accommodation.

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The two maps illustrate how a student accommodation has changed since 2010 Overall, student housing has undergone extensive changes, the most important of which is the addition of more study-bedroom at the expense of less space for other rooms. In 2010, in the area around the main building, there was an entrance to go inside the main center and two big gardens surrounding it. In the center of the whole student residence, there was a massive hall which was adjacent to the only bathroom. To the north of these rooms, the living room adjoined a study-bedroom. There was also another study-bedroom being located in close proximity to the living room and bathroom. Opposite the hall and bathroom, there was a kitchen which is positioned next to the study-bedroom. Today, there was still an entrance in the grounds surrounding the main accommodation, however the garden in the south gives its place to a parking lot. In the main housing, the hall is downsized to make room for a bigger bathroom and there was an addition of an ensuite bathroom, being to the east of the hall. The living room is changed into a big study-bedroom and the one next to it is made bigger too. The study-bedroom which is situated in the southeast of the building remains unchanged. A new area in this accommodation is the kitchen or social area which is flanked by the two study-bedrooms, located opposite the big bathroom. Moreover, the study-bedroom which was to the west of the living room is doubled now so there are two rooms for study and bedroom.

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