The bar graph illustrates the number of visits to a community website during its first and second years of operation. Overall, it is evident that the website generally attracted more visitors in the second year than in the first year of operation. Both years experienced broadly similar trends, with the highest figure occurring in August in the first year, and June or July in the second year. In the first year, there were nearly 2,500 website visits in September, after which the number gradually increased and rocketed to around 10,000 in November. It then fell considerably to about 1,000 in February and March, which was the lowest number of visits during the two years, before recovering and ending at around 15,000 in August, the highest figure of the first year. Regarding the second year of use, the number of visits stood at around 4,000 in September, then it gradually increased before rising more sharply to roughly 17,500 in November. Although the number remained stable for two months, it gradually declined by about 7,500 in February and March. After that, it recovered to a peak of over 22,500 in June and remained the same level in July, before witnessing a more substantial drop to more than 13,500 in August, lower than that of the first year at the same time.
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The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the number of visits to a community website in the first and second years of use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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