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The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pictures illustrate how a college’s campus has changed since 2006. Overall, the area has undergone several important changes, the most significant of which are the improvement in the internal road system and the development of sports facilities. As for the improvements made to the road network, in 2006, the facilities in the college were connected mostly by one single path. Following redevelopment, connectivity within the college has been improved. Specifically, more pathways have been added, all of which surround the newly put cafeteria in the central zone. This change allows for walking to all buildings in the college. In addition, at the top of the college, a bus stop is now available, enabling bus users to access this place. Regarding main facilities, to the right of the cafeteria, the car park near the street road has been reduced by almost half of its original size. This reduction has made way for a bike storage, which features a little greenery. Adjacent to these parking areas is a sports centre, whose zone previously served as a library. However, this area has witnessed an expansion, corresponding with the decline in size of the sports field flanking it on the right. On the left hand of the cafeteria, building 1 and the trees nearby have remained unchanged, so has building 2 opposite the sports field. The two buildings are linked by a library, which has been relocated and expanded in scale as a substitute for former vegetation here.

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