The following year, many people in the countryside moved to urban areas, and the proportion in the rural areas fell. In my opinion, fluctuations in population in the countryside are a negative development because this makes cities more populated and makes it easier to have pollution, and the quality of life in rural areas will go down. In this essay, I will discuss why I said it is a negative development.
नमूना विवरण
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
विषय
In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Introduction
Body
On the one hand, if cities have various people, then houses and apartments will rise so that everyone can live there. This leads to some problems about environment and human health because when they build a new construction, they will cut down trees to build them then not have green air anymore, and when cities have big population they will have a lot of transports such as car, motorbike or buses will emissions carbon dioxide, this easier to have air pollution, noisy pollution, and waste pollution, etc. Moreover, crowded urban areas will have traffic jams in the rush hours when people go to walk or go back home, this makes people exhausted and waste time to go somewhere because they spend hours commuting, which reduces their productivity.+ There are many reasons that I said that is negative development.On the other hand, local people in the countryside usually is elderly person or middle aged people because the atmosphere in there clear, and peaceful, it suitable to elderly person like our grandparents to vacation and retirement so that main reasons the adults want go to the countryside when they old and retired. However, when people decide to go far away from their hometown, some locations in rural areas will get poor and not development, do not have many modern facilities or technology machines so the quality of life in the countryside will go down and not be crowded, and the people in there will not vibrant and have a calm personality.+
Conclusion
In conclusion, I think this is negative aspects because cities will get crowded population and sometimes have disadvantages and make people have trouble. In the rural areas, it may be poor and not convenient like cities but in return the atmosphere there is green and not harmful for their health. It fits people who are retired and have their own gardening at home.
समग्र स्कोर
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गहन विश्लेषण
Task 2 - Essay Writing
Task 2 - नमूना लेख
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