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Task 2
คะแนนทั้งหมด
22810ตัวอย่าง
21/10/2026
6.5
คะแนนรวม

In some parts of the world, traditional food is gradually being replaced by fast food, and this trend is having a negative effect on families and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this belief?

เนื้อหา:

Recently, in various regions around the world, fast food is replacing traditional food leading to a negative impact on families and society. From my perspective, I do agree with the opinion and throug...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
6
Coherence & Cohesion:
7
Lexical Resource:
7
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
6
21/10/2026
7.5
คะแนนรวม

In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters, and writers. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

เนื้อหา:

In this contemporary society, science and technology are highly prioritized due to their significant contribution to human life. Nevertheless, artists such as musicians, painters, and writers are stil...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
8
Coherence & Cohesion:
8
Lexical Resource:
7
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
8
21/10/2026
6.0
คะแนนรวม

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

เนื้อหา:

It is often suggested that scientists' fundamental goal must refine people's lives. I completely don not accord with this idea because there are lots of inventions which don't profit people's lives bu...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
6
Coherence & Cohesion:
7
Lexical Resource:
6
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
6
21/10/2026
6.0
คะแนนรวม

Some feel that tourism endangers culture while others feel it is beneficial. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

เนื้อหา:

Some people argue that merits and demerits of tourism with culture. In my opnion, i advocate to the benefits that travel brings to culture in economic values. On the one hand, tourism might wield disa...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
6
Coherence & Cohesion:
6
Lexical Resource:
6
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
6
21/10/2026
8.0
คะแนนรวม

Some people say that in the digital age, theatres and cinemas are no longer important as people can watch all the entertainment they want online. Others argue that theatres and cinemas are still important both economically and culturally. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

เนื้อหา:

A segment of society proposes that theaters and cinemas are negligible in the digital age, since citizens can enjoy all forms of recreation online. Others argue that these forms of entertainment remai...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
8
Coherence & Cohesion:
8
Lexical Resource:
8
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
8
21/10/2026
5.5
คะแนนรวม

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

เนื้อหา:

It is often suggested that scientests fundamental goal must refine people's lives. I completely don't accord with this idea because there are lots of inventions which don't profit people's lives but s...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
6
Coherence & Cohesion:
6
Lexical Resource:
5
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
6
21/10/2026
8.0
คะแนนรวม

The government should spend money on sport facilities for training top athletes while others argue that they should spend money on sport facilities for everybody. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

เนื้อหา:

Some people argue that government funding should be directed towards sports facilities for elite athletes, whereas others believe that such investment should benefit the wider public. In my view, alth...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
8
Coherence & Cohesion:
9
Lexical Resource:
8
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
8
21/10/2026
8.0
คะแนนรวม

In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?

เนื้อหา:

In many countries, juvenile delinquency has become an increasingly serious concern. This essay will examine the main reasons behind this trend and suggest appropriate ways to deal with young offenders...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
8
Coherence & Cohesion:
8
Lexical Resource:
8
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
8
21/10/2026
7.5
คะแนนรวม

Some people think the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefits are in world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion

เนื้อหา:

The trend of international cooperation has opened up a host of opportunities for developments. While some argue that these advantages are mostly in environmental protection, others claim that business...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
8
Coherence & Cohesion:
8
Lexical Resource:
7
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
7
21/10/2026
7.5
คะแนนรวม

Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

เนื้อหา:

Modern communication technology, including social media and messaging applications, has become an essential part of daily life. However, I agree that it has some negative effects on social relationshi...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
8
Coherence & Cohesion:
8
Lexical Resource:
7
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
8
21/10/2026
6.0
คะแนนรวม

The proportion of elderly people in society is increasing, resulting in a greater need for healthcare services and social support. Some people believe that this development has positive effects on society, while others argue that it creates more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

เนื้อหา:

These days, the population of elderly people is increasing quickly over the years. As a result, there would a greater need for healthcare organisations. Some people believe that this development has p...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
7
Coherence & Cohesion:
7
Lexical Resource:
5
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
5
21/10/2026
8.0
คะแนนรวม

Some think scientists should be allowed to send messages into space to communicate with other life forms while others believe this is too dangerous. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

เนื้อหา:

In recent years, scientists have been exploring the possibility of sending messages into space to contact other life forms. While some support this idea as a way to advance scientific knowledge, other...

คะแนนตามเกณฑ์:
Task Response:
8
Coherence & Cohesion:
8
Lexical Resource:
8
Grammatical Range & Accuracy:
8

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